Monday, June 19, 2006

Another preview, another story

Here's a page in the making. It's from another short story i'm doing, in collaboration with europeen writer Yrosh. More details soon.

A little step-by-step of the lower part.


4 Comments:

Blogger MW said...

Let me preface this critique by saying that I love your style and look at your work on a regular basis...but the fifth panel in its finished state is really difficult to decipher. I knew it was violence, but not until I looked at the step-by-step did I realize that the wolf was cutting off the guys head.

June 19, 2006 3:57 PM  
Blogger Dub said...

Thx for the comment MW, I apreciate.

I understand the confusion, but you have to keep in mind that the pages is far from over. I'll eventually draw the head, wich will sure help. ;)
And probably play with blood splaters to give the sense of motion. I often go for radical change along the process, so don't be suprise if you don't reconize the pages when It'll be finish.

Come back soon for the finished version. :)

Thx again for leaving one of those rare critics comments.

June 20, 2006 6:10 AM  
Blogger mylydy said...

J'adore et j'adule :D

June 21, 2006 9:12 AM  
Blogger bandini said...

vivement la finished version et en attendant quelle belle énergie, et un joli rendu de flingue en case 3 et la dernière case!!!

l'as du pif l'yrosh quand même ;-D

June 25, 2006 10:38 AM  

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